情绪描写技巧

在写作中,对人物情感的描写常常能使人物的形象显得生动鲜活。人的情感可以分很多种,如喜悦、满意、失望、悲伤、憎恨、愤怒、惊讶、恐惧、赞赏等等。在英语中有很多不同的词和句式来表达这些不同的情感。

、情绪描写之喜乐

喜乐的情绪通常和动作“笑”结合,这样写出来的句式更灵动活泼。常见的表达方式有:smile brightly; laugh; beam; light (sth) up; light up with; burst into laughter; burst out laughing;wear a bright/broad smile; give sb a smile。

学一学:

beam: smile very happily

light up: if someone’s face or eyes light up, they show pleasure, excitement etc.

light up with:His eyes lit up with laughter.       Her face lit up with pleasure.

light sth up: to make someone’s face or eyes show pleasure or excitement.

Suddenly a bright smile lit up her face/eyes.

例如:他的父母满意地笑了。

译法一:His parents beamed/smiled with satisfaction.

译法二:His parents wore a satisfied smile on his face.

练一练:

1.看到直升飞机,Jane 高兴地笑了起来。

【答案一】 At the sight of the helicopter, Jane beamed with wild joy.

【答案二】 Seeing the helicopter, Jane beamed with wild joy.

【答案三】 The moment she caught sight of the helicopter, Jane’s eyes/ face lit up with delight.

【答案四】 The moment she caught sight of the helicopter, a bright smile lit up Jane’s face/eyes.

2.当妈妈亲吻他时,小baby开心极了。

【答案一】When his mother kissed him on the cheek, the baby was full of joy.

【答案二】 When his mother kissed him on the cheek, it seemed as if the baby were on top of the world. (非常开心)

【答案三】 When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek, his face beamed and his bright smile lit up the room. (眉开眼笑;笑容照亮房间)

、情绪描写之激动

动词:whistle(吹口哨)/dance/ jump/leap with joy; feel a surge(激增)of happiness/delight/joy/excitement; (one’s eyes) twinkle(闪闪发光); (one’s heart) beat/pound wildly(心跳加速); can hardly conceal one’s excited(几乎无法掩饰兴奋的心情)

形容词: delighted; overjoyed; excited; thrilled; be wild with joy(欣喜若狂)

句子:A wild gaiety(快乐)took hold of her. 一种疯狂的快乐控制了她。

I was pleased beyond description.  我高兴得难以形容。

Her flushed face was shining with excitement.(flush v.发红)   她激动得满脸通红。

练一练:

当主持人宣布她获奖时,她兴奋极了。

【答案一】When the host announced that she won the prize, she felt excited/ thrilled.

【答案二】When the host announced that she won the prize, her eyes twinkled with excitement.

【答案三】When the host announced that she won the prize, her heart was pounding with wild joy.

【答案四】When the host announced that she won the prize, a wild excitement took hold of her.

【答案五】Knowing she won the prize, she felt a surge of excitement.

【答案六】Knowing she won the prize, she was overcome with excitement.

、情绪描写之生气

feel/get angry/furious;seized by anger; feel a surge of anger(rage/fury); eyes blaze; storm out of/into/off (气冲冲地…); storm(怒吼);

句子:

① I was seized by anger. 我被愤怒覆盖。

② He was fuming with rage. 他大发雷霆。

③ His anger boiled over. 他的愤怒情绪突然爆发起来了。

④ He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage. 他几乎控制不住自己的愤怒。

⑤ He was breathing fire and fury. 他怒火冲天。

⑥ His voice trembled with anger. 他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。

⑦ He gave me a look of burning anger. 他看了我一眼,怒不可遏。

练一练:

Sam 感到非常生气。

【答案一】:Sam felt very angry.

【答案二】:Sam stood rooted to the spot, his eyes blazing with anger.

【答案三】:Sam felt so angry that he stormed out of the room, slamming the door furiously behind him.

【答案四】:Boiling with rage, Sam shook his fist at me.

【答案五】:Filled with fury, Sam was unable to utter a single word.

、情绪描写之伤心痛苦

sad; bitter; sorrowful; feel a surge of sadness; (sadness) surge within sb; one’s heart ache; be overcome with sadness

句子:

① He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.   他静静地站着,眼泪顺着脸颊滚了下来

② I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness.   我觉得我在悲伤的海洋中漂浮。

③ Her hands were shaking. She was on the verge of tears.   她的手在颤抖。 她快要哭了。

④ She sobbed, hiding her face in her hands.     她抽泣着,双手掩面。

⑤ I tried to fight back tears. /My eyes were filled with tears.   我努力忍住眼泪。 我的眼睛充满了泪水。

⑥ A frown(皱眉)now stood on his face.    他开始皱眉。

⑦ They sat there with glum looks on their faces.   他们坐在那里,脸上带着忧郁的表情。

⑧ The news cast a cloud of gloom over his face.   这个消息使他脸上蒙一片阴影。

练一练:

1.她伤心不已。

【答案一】:She felt extremely sad.

【答案二】:A sadness came over her.

【答案三】:Her heart ached, tears streaming down her cheeks.

【答案四】:Numb with grief, she became speechless.

【答案五】:Feeling a surge of sadness, she couldn’t help crying bitterly.

【答案六】:Sadness surging within her, she burst into tears.

2.他哽咽欲哭。

【答案】:A lump came to his throat.

3.她的双眼哭得通红

【答案】:Her eyes were red from crying.

4.她的眼里满含泪水。

【答案】:Her eyes brimmed with tears.

5.眼泪沿着她的面颊流下来.

【答案】:Tears coursed/trickled/streamed/ran down her cheeks.

6.Oliver 独自一人在房间里流下了孤独伤心的泪水

【答案】:Alone in the room, Oliver cried bitter, lonely tears.

7.Wilbur哭着直到睡着。

【答案】:Wilbur cried himself to sleep.

、情绪描写之恐惧

frightened; panicked; scared; speechless; in (a) panic; in a cold sweat; be full of fear; be filled with terror; be rooted to the spot; freeze; run away; flee; one’s knees feel weak; (hands) sweat;

句子:

① He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.  他转向我,眼睛里充满了恐惧。

② Fear slowly creeps upon her.   恐惧慢慢地涌在她身上。

③ She was struck with horror when…   当……时,她被吓坏了

④ Her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.   她的脸变得苍白,站在那里结结巴巴。

⑤ A flood of fear welled up in him. / Fear flooded over him.  他心里涌起一股恐惧。

⑥ Her heart beat so violently that she felt nearly suffocated(窒息).   她的心跳太剧烈,几乎要窒息了

练一练:

我感到很害怕。

【答案一】:I felt very frightened/scared/panicked.

【答案二】:I was in (a) panic/ was full of fear.

【答案三】:I stood rooted to the spot, brimming with fear/filled with fear.

【答案四】:I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.

【答案五】:I froze with terror, too scared to move.

【答案六】:I was seized by a strong sense of horror; my palms sweating.

六、情绪描写之其他

1)感动

① Touched deeply/immensely, we…被深深感动,我们……

② Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heart felt gratitude.她热泪盈眶,表示衷心的感谢。

③ With tears streaming down her face,she… 泪水顺着她的脸颊流了下来,……

2)紧张

①  Her face turned pal,feeling like sitting on pins and needles.  她的脸刷白,感觉如坐针毡。

② His palms were sweaty and knees were soft.   他手心出汗,膝盖发软。

3)尴尬/羞愧

① He was embarrassed/ashamed.

② His face flushed(通红)/burned(燃烧)with embarrassment/shame.他因尴尬而满脸通红。他窘得脸都红了。

③ He hung/dropped/lowered his head in shame.他羞愧地低下了头。

④ She felt so ashamed that she could feel her face burning.  她感到羞愧难当,脸上滚烫。

⑤ So ashamed was she that she could feel the blood rush to her face.     她感到羞愧极了,血液涌上脸颊。

4)绝望

① He felt hopeless/desperate.

② Upon hearing the bad new, she was suddenly thrown into a world of darkness and sank into hopelessness.听到这个坏消息,他突然被投入黑暗世界,陷入绝望。

③ His beliefs in looking forward and seeing the positive in everything deserted him. 他那种向前看、看到一切事物积极一面的信念抛弃了他。

5)感谢

① I ran over to my father, reached out my hands and hugged/embraced him tightly/firmly.

我跑向父亲,伸出手,紧紧抱住他。

② With grateful tears hanging in his eye, she kept extending(表达)his gratitude(感激),“Thank you so much!”

他眼中满是感激的泪水,不停地说:“非常感谢!”

6)鼓励

① Taking a deep breath, I managed to calm myself down and walked up to the platform confidently.

深吸一口气,我成功地让自己镇定,然后自信地走上了讲台。

② I walked over to him,and patted him on the shoulder encouraging: “Come on!”

我走向他,拍拍他的肩膀,鼓励道:“加油!”

7)震惊

① He was surprised/shocked.

② His eyes grew wide/widened with surprise/astonishment(震惊)when he heard the news.

听到这个消息后,他惊讶地睁大了眼睛。

③ It’s hard to believe.He didn’t accept the job that he was long for.

真难以置信,他竟然没有接受那份期待已久的工作。

④ Grandfathers death was really a bolt from the blue for me.

祖父去世的消息对我来说简直是晴天霹雷。

8)疑惑/迷茫

① He felt confused.

② With a confused look on his face,he had no idea what to do.

他露出困惑的表情,不知道该做什么。

③ He scratched his head, having on idea what to do.

他挠了挠头,不知道该做什么。

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